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gazing towards the moonlight, i knew that i had chosen a hard path

Second moonlight photo: [link]

Hope you like it, any fav and feedback is very appreciated.

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:iconlefauneparisien:
After seeing the first moonlight picture, I must say that I am a bit disappointed in this one.

First, the composition problem is still here - exactly the same : you chose your crop poorly. At the bottom, there is not much air for the plant to "breath" in the picture. A bit more of this dark area would have been very useful for the eye. I don't usually like central compositions, but I think in that case, it would have worked : the light part at the top, the plant in the middle, the dark area at the bottom (1/3-1/3-1/3).

Plus, the tones don't really work for me here. Yeah, it's more natural. But it's neither artificial nor natural. Neither night nor day. We are stuck between two periods of time and we can't really choose. Very uneasy feeling.

To finish on brighter tones, I can say you really have control of the depth of field. And since we are both working with EOS cameras, I know it's not always easy on them. :)
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:icondave-studios:
nice colours :)

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:iconevuremus:
extraodinary blur and tones, the contrast is great and background are great too! :heart:
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:iconwinemelle:
I love it!

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:iconwinklepickers:
Very delicate and lovely. :)

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:iconegg-let:
cool it is very painterly

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:iconpatrickruegheimer:
stunning. o_o

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:iconwitchgirl117:
Oh this is very beautiful, It looks like the plant is underwater though, but that a nice thing. It's probably the blurry effect of the background that kind of make underwaterish.
I really like this photo, It's has that dark serenity feeling to it =]

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:iconkparks:
Very nice image!

You certainly have the "selective focus close-up on plants" thing *down*!

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Canon
Canon EOS 350D DIGITAL
1/320 second
F/1.4
50 mm
200
Mar 15, 2009, 4:51:50 PM

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