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There is love in this coldness

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Second in this series:
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I think there is too much balance in play here, the colors are calm, so I believe if the subject is calm to, the balance should be calm more than anything.

I like the fact that you have the one focused flower on the right, but I do not like the way all of the other flowers distract away from it, I believe you should have chosen just the one to make so prominent, when you have white in play you need more bokeh to enhance the subject. But thats just imho.

The colors themselves complicate the balance as well for me in that the green only comes up only so high, and the other colors drown it out, creating a sort of unappealing over sweetness to the color scheme. The blue tinges seem over satured a bit to me, especially more of the mid to right side, I think they should take up more room, or be less saturated and concentrated centrally.

That one spot of white on the branch in the corner top left distracts from the wonderful frame of values in your picture, if this was in black and white it would be a little less of a worry, but being magenta where that spot is at makes it stand out far too much and further distract from your original subject.

Nice job overall, but I think even in the most popular deviations there is room to improve.
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Sparia Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2011  Student General Artist
its soo pretty...
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TheSilverFoxx Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2010  Professional Photographer
absolutely love the coloring, how did you go about creating such beautiful blending?
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april182 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2010
Featured: [link] :heart:
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Kaitaria Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2010
Pretty ornament theme
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jyunogozen Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2010  Professional General Artist
i was wondering if i could use this picture for a class project to represent proximity
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Sortvind Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2010
sorry, i have a strict no rule i have to keep, hope you understand :)
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jyunogozen Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2010  Professional General Artist
i was wondering if i could use this picture for a class project to represent proximity
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livelikeawind Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2010
you have been featured here -> [link]
really adore your work :hug:

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Sortvind Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2010
Thank you :heart:
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livelikeawind Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2010
you are welcome

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tell me please some crazy thing you did, or still do and enjoy(ed) doing it : )
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wailing Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2010
pretty:)
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Catliv Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2010   Photographer
your wonderful picture is featured here!:aww:
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yv Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2010  Professional General Artist
lovely!
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innocencezack Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2010  Professional Photographer
:heart: Featured --> [link] :love:
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11lives Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Gorgeous ^^
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coyotepam Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2010
Beautiful. Hugs...Pam:icon8jessica7::iconforchun:
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pocketXsizedXchica Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
absolutely amazing
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cresun Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2010
pene toner
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beyondvickyz Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2010   Writer
I like the colors
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Li-Si Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2010
Jeg syns det var vakkert, og syns det var bare fint med flere blomster som er fremtredende.
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TOSHiiRO Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2010  Student General Artist
Everything you upload is amazing. xD They are all worth a Daily Deviant! :O
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SemenovaN Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2010   Photographer
sorry for the small format
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Sortvind Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2010
Small format?
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me3009 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2010  Hobbyist
Really gorgeous! :love:
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inObrAS Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2010
:heart::nod:
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oro-elui Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
picturesque.
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zerooloord Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2010
nice shot !
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komah11 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2010
the colours...the fix....the dreamy aura...brilliant image...and i dont know why, but causes in me a feeling of nostalgia...
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yvonnejanik Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2010
Great colors! Beautiful photo
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YOUYIX3 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2010
beautiful colours!
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JJphotographer Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2010   Photographer
Great colours.
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FreakyPinkyDoll Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
wow
beautiful colours!
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davincipoppalag Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
beautiful work
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Stine07 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2010  Hobbyist
Simply beautiful! :heart: The colours and the focus is very pretty! :aww:
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RaSeR555 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2010
nice colors
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winklepickers Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2010
I think you are a clever enough artist to make what you want us to see. :)
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:iconmashia:
Mashia Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2010  Student Photographer
Great colors and subject. good job! :clap:
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JuneJewellery Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Enten så er du veldig tidlig oppe, eller veldig sent i seng. Haha. :p

Utrolig fint bilde. Fokuset gjøt at bildene ikke får det klassiske trekket av blomstene "alle" har tatt bilder av. Jeg elsker stort sett alt av bilder fra deg, stå på! Du er kjempeflink! :)
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havockid Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2010
i really like the colours and the focus :D haha
the sole flower really stands out!
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