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Death Note II New Worldby *Sortvind

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My second photo inspired by the death note series.
I think the dice came clearer through here.
The dice does not only represent the dices in death note but the symbol they represent in this context

Any fav and feedback is very appreciated

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Submitted on: December 18, 2009
Image Size: 140 KB
Resolution: 900×600

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Critique by ~Zaiakai Dec 20, 2009, 8:02:57 AM

The photo itself is lovely, I think you did a great job. But since this is a critique I want to share my opinion(s) on how to make it better...
The whole image seems pretty bland. I understand your concept and I love the way you captured it- but I feel you could have done more with the overall image to make it more memorable. Maybe holding the dice between the fingers or another hand reaching for it. Something that still works with the concept but has a little more life. Another thing is; I feel the blurry outlines of the hand clashes with the crispness of the dice. Sharpen the features of the hand and it will blend a little better. (in theory) More shadowing on the palm would have made the hand stand out and that would make the piece really jump out at you. On a brighter note... The dark background is exactly what this piece calls for- so good choice there! The blue/grey hue works wonderfully and that's one of my favourite parts about this picture. (really sets the mood!) The clear dice is ideal and so overall I LOVE the piece. I hope this helps and I hope I don't sound mean...! (that is NOT my intention)

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Critique by !Mhawy-pretty Dec 18, 2009, 4:27:55 PM

Nice Photo ,, full of concepts , i can See hope too or giving or even hanging ,, i really like this photo , it's eyes catching , perfect focus , perfect lighting ,, this photo deep Omg ..

, the angle u've chosen amaaazing ,, when i saw it in the first time i was like

.. your shot inspired me

even the title perfect , these photo makes me thinking and wanna have the same concept it has , i'm sure now this photo will have million and million of favorites, so keep it up with ur gr8 ideas coz i saw ur outstanding gallery ..
peace my talent friend
Well done