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Fading Dreams by *Sortvind:iconSortvind:

Categories Photography > Animals, Plants & Nature > Flowers & Plants

©2009 *Sortvind
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No one told me dreams could Fade

Hope you like it, any fav and feedback is very appreciated.

Dreams Returning: [link]

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=Savatey Apr 29, 2009, 6:01:43 PM
A very good shot. It fascinates a viewer with its softness, mildness and twilight mystery.

So, let's get back to the point. The composition of this shot is balanced and fresh. I like a kind of an arc that flowers form. Soft color spots, hues and tones form a nice, harmonious blend.

I don't think that this photo lacks sharpness or being sharp would make flowers look better. They look nice, soft and romantic just the way they are now. Being a little bit blurry, being lit with soft light fits the general mood of the photo.

So, the strong point of this photo are vision and impact. The technnique is good. Well done!

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=TheOne-WhoEscaped Apr 29, 2009, 8:58:43 AM
I really love how you have focused on the flowers, leaving the background slightly blurry but you can see what is actually in the background.
The colour is stunning as it makes the picture soft. Having the blue background, it makes the white flowers stand out.

One the other hand, the main focus I assume is the flowers, they seem a little blurry. If the flowers where sharper I think it would make the photo stand out more.

All in all, I think you would give Vista wall papers a run for there money. This is my first Critique and I'm running out of words to fill the 100 words minimum. :D
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*Jay-Cougar-Prints Apr 29, 2009, 5:50:47 AM
nice and soft :)

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~Beneflo Apr 29, 2009, 5:53:45 AM
Den var utrolif fin. Passende tittel også :)

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~k4po Apr 29, 2009, 5:55:45 AM
Gorgeous right :]
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~Silvarith Apr 29, 2009, 5:55:53 AM
i like the softness to it and the peace that brings once you take a look. :clap:

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`davincipoppalag Apr 29, 2009, 5:56:43 AM
very lovely!

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~BlackInk-- Apr 29, 2009, 5:59:06 AM
thats truly beautiful the way you've managed to capture that mood right there...
they even look like they're in despair

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*EyesRadioLies Apr 29, 2009, 7:11:58 AM
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Amazing shot!

I got so awesome blossom shots too, Im excited to post them!

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