Future Dreamingby *Sortvind

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Taken 3 years ago, hidden in my archive. Not a new concept, but i tried to make it interesting

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Critique by ~SpectrumPT Oct 4, 2009, 8:35:40 AM

Again you show your great skills with macros in a constant game of light and colour. Well done for that!

I think this photo could propably have achieved more. The light rays are striking and the droplets on top of the CD create an amazing pattern and so I wonder what the results could have been even better if you didn't include in the photo the edges of the CD. They ruin the magic of the "little universe" you tried to create in a way that is brings the photo "down to earth". A closer macro would probably create an even greater effect... But again I reckon that if you remove the edges, the object would most likely be unidentifiable. It is a dilemma really that can only find an answer in the intentions of the artist.

Compostion wise is still great and the photo has a sense of movement that manage to successfully lead my eyes towards the water drops in the background. Again, I feel hypnotized by the striking colours of the light rays.

Keep it up!

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